As I walked past the jumping cathedral, I thought of what would be happening inside. Then i saw a poster it said
“Welcome ,
“Have you been waiting to see a rock star have you been tired of playing boring games.Then come on out into the city to see…… Elvis Presley,the black hearts ,the beetles and many more !!!!!!!!
Dates: August 10th,11th,12th,and 13th.”
O...M...G
THAT DATE OF MY B-DAY!!!
The next day…….
I was half way into making my dinner and i suddenly heard
“Breaking news ,
Elvis presley has gone missing!”
My jaw dropped like I had a 10kg weight hanging on it. I ran like a cheetah in to the living room. And the news lady said
“ No one knows what happened to Elvis but we are still trying to find out”
I watch the news for hours and hours until i fell asleep ,but when I woke up I heard
“THE BEATLES are now missing
It is crazy to think that 2 rock stars have gone missing in 24 hours”............................................
Hi Francheska my name is Stephanie from Red Hill school and I am 10 years old I will like to Learn your story about The last Rock star and I found your story amazing and nice to reading and next time I wood like you to wrtie a story about animals.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Francheska, I love how you used similes, did you have to use similes or did you have the option? Next time you could go a bit deeper into the story by telling us if there were any suspects in the story. Thank you for posting this for all of us to share.-Zoe-
ReplyDeleteHi Francheska I like how you added lots of detail into your story I would like to see what will happen next. I really liked the part when you said the Beetles have now gone missing its crazy to think that 2 rock stars have gone missing in 24 hours...
ReplyDeleteHi Francheska I like how you added lots of detail into your story
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